Excellent analysis, covered all criteria in detail. Could be improved by a clearer structure, such as putting all of the elements of mise en scene together. There was one inaccuracy where you referred to a shot as an extreme close-up instead of a close up. More images should be added to illustrate throughout. Vanessa / Gabrielle
Excellent analysis, covered all criteria in detail. Could be improved by a clearer structure, such as putting all of the elements of mise en scene together. There was one inaccuracy where you referred to a shot as an extreme close-up instead of a close up. More images should be added to illustrate throughout. Vanessa / Gabrielle
ReplyDeleteThank you , I will correct this as soon as possible
DeleteSome excellent improvements and it is pleasing to see your work consistently improving. V
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