What improvements could
you have made?
Presentation/Evaluation
Analysing and researching my chosen TV drama which was power gave
me a better understanding about all the techniques and shots used in media such
as establishing shots and close ups etc. , it adapted my knowledge about all
the different media skills and editing happening within a TV drama .
By planning the storyboard it gave me an overview of what
locations to shot in and what shots I should use and to aim for task set from
getting to point A to B, so by planning what our short film was going to be
based on it gave me and insight on how we should film and edit everything, we
wanted to cover every aspect that was given to us so by writing the storyboard
it showed what we can incorporate in our actual shirt film. The storyboard was
background verbally about what our short film was roughly going to be about,
for us it was about getting what was written on paper visually produced.
During the whole pre- production process I found very helpful
because the more I learned the more experience I had with media overall it was
very successful because I filmed my short film, so for example I learned how to
use a camera hand held so its practise for future projects involving hand held
movements also when we were practising shots such establishing shots, tracking
and panning shots majority of them were hand held movements. Filming was quite
successful because all the shots we film were to plan we met the brief and
success criteria given to us. When we filmed a certain amount of footage with a
tripod to sturdy the movement and to capture different locations shots to make
our short film look more professional.
Our strengthens were filming, editing, structuring and adding most
of shots required because we worked as a team and finished when it came to
creating a short film we were creative and imaginative we didn’t just think of
something similar or predictable, we came up with a different story which
thought was one of our strengthens because it showed creativity. Another
strengthen would be directing and production because in my group I was the
director so I made sure we wasn’t going off task and everything was filmed
correctly.
Our weaknesses was that there wasn’t enough different locations
(mise en scene) used In our short film so we filmed from point A to B but to the viewers it probably not as
clear as you would think , another weakness would be that most of our footage
was hand held so it shows a lack of professionalism , because we could of used
a tripod for most of our shots so that’s a point we could take on for the
future , also another we could work on is using a simple backing track not a
song that incorporates swear words. Finally we could of added shots like shot
reverse shot and we could of added complex movements to make it more interesting
such as TV dramas like power and empire.
The class thought our short film was quite creative with the use
of story titles but with some improvements it would be even better such as if
we used less had held shots and made it clear from point A to B. The improvements
I would make is that I would change the story line a little bit more to make it
more clearer to viewers about what we are trying to portray and also I would
improve the music we added I would change it to something more authentic and
bolder.
Pearl you have completed the induction project and to a good standard. Your evaluation is well written and shows Merit level standard of work. All tasks have been approached and completed on time. Commitment to the project and ideas is evident through the groups work and you on individual tasks. Well done.
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